Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games. Why do they do this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays youngsters are wasting their free
time
on the computer by playing video games. In my opinion ,spending a lot of moments on the computer is a negative development.
Firstly
, playing sport on electronic devices for more
time
can be a bad impact on an eye. If they continuously watch at a particular place
then
it would affect their eye.
For example
, in ,past I read an incident of surat that a boy of 10th class was addicted to playing. He was spending his free
time
playing games and he spent 5 to 6 hr on electronics due to
this
his eyes get a huge impact and he gets spectacles. So I believe that much
time
on electronics can
also
be harmful.
Secondly
, they will not be able to focus at one point. Their mind will be affected by electronic devices. They will develop their
skills
in computer sport but they will lose their good
skills
like
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Physical activity, educational
skills
and many more . Let's take an example, I am a good skater and I know many
skills
about skates. If I spend much
time
on computers
then
I will not be able to focus and my body will remain unhealthy because of no physical work and
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would not be able to perform my
skills
. So I prefer to not be addicted to
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sport. In my conclusion, did technology is increasing day by day it is good but
although
it can
also
become dangerous for our health. Personally, I think that wasting free
time
on a videogame is not beneficial.
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