Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games. Why do they do this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays youngsters are wasting their free

time

on the computer by playing video games. In my opinion ,spending a lot of moments on the computer is a negative development.

Firstly

, playing sport on electronic devices for more

time

can be a bad impact on an eye. If they continuously watch at a particular place

then

it would affect their eye.

For example

, in ,past I read an incident of surat that a boy of 10th class was addicted to playing. He was spending his free

time

playing games and he spent 5 to 6 hr on electronics due to

this

his eyes get a huge impact and he gets spectacles. So I believe that much

time

on electronics can

also

be harmful.

Secondly

, they will not be able to focus at one point. Their mind will be affected by electronic devices. They will develop their

skills

in computer sport but they will lose their good

skills

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Physical activity, educational

skills

and many more . Let's take an example, I am a good skater and I know many

skills

about skates. If I spend much

time

on computers

then

I will not be able to focus and my body will remain unhealthy because of no physical work and

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would not be able to perform my

skills

. So I prefer to not be addicted to

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sport. In my conclusion, did technology is increasing day by day it is good but

although

it can

also

become dangerous for our health. Personally, I think that wasting free

time

on a videogame is not beneficial.