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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

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Obesity
 has been
a
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major trouble since many years ago. There are a rapidly increasing number of obese
people
 around the world with the
likehood
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likelihood
 of getting various kinds of crucial
health
 problems. According to my perspective, the main purpose for
this
 is skipping
the
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breakfast
 or having instant food for
the
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breakfast
. I think the only way to overcome
this
 issue is to lead
people
 to have a nutritious and balanced
breakfast
 diet. In
this
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 I am going to elaborate
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 purpose and the solution mentioned above. In
the
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modern society, mostly
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middle-aged
people
 have the probability to become a victim of serious
health
 problems because of their
obesity
. In the competitive society, they have been frequently used to skip
the
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breakfast
 or have instant food more. The more a person earns with the industrial revolution, the poorer their
health
 will be.
For instance
,
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research has proved that 60% of
people
 skip their meal in the morning. Consecutively, the degree of
overweight
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 population
as well as the risk of having
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, as well as the risk of having health problems,
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health
 problems has
also
rose
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 up by 50%.
However
, those
people
 should have a proper direction towards a nutritious
breakfast
 from using social media, advertising or any kind of technological achievement as nowadays most of the
people
 are more familiar with those kinds of advancements. In conclusion, the reason for the improvement in
obesity
 and the solution was clear enough to emphasize my view that
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obesity
 would be able
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anyone
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 to the probability of crucial diseases.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • sedentary
  • caloric intake
  • genetics
  • nutritional awareness
  • processed foods
  • fast food
  • lifestyle diseases
  • preventative measures
  • tax incentives
  • urban planning
  • community gardens
  • wellness initiatives
  • dietary guidelines
  • physical fitness
  • calorie-dense
  • portion control
  • metabolic rate
  • health literacy
  • food deserts
  • work-life balance
  • junk food
  • BMI (Body Mass Index)
  • non-communicable diseases
  • food labeling
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