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Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

#people #person #culture #country #origin #influence
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Cultural values are passing
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from generations
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generations
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 to generation in societies.
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 some
people
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 think that the born
country
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 gives less influence to
people
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’s attitudes and behaviours, other
people
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 including myself think that native
contry’s
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country's
cluture
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culture
 plays a vital role in a person’s behaviour. With globalization, the world is becoming smaller.
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,
people
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 are experiencing different products, ideas from
worlwide
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worldwide
world
. Due to
this
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 reason, some individuals have
forgotton
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forgotten
 the original cultural values of their
country
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.
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, in Sri Lanka, there are western marriages.
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,
this
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 can be seen only in a few places in the
country
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 while in many other places,
people
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 give the priority to
traditional
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 way of celebrating marriages.
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, even though globalization could somewhat change
people
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’s beliefs, many
people
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 still stick with their original
cutural
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cultural
 activities. Regarding the definitions of
culture
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, it basically depends on the native
country
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. A good case in point is,
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 many Indians live in
USA
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the USA
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, they have not adapted to the western
culture
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 and they still respect their original cultural values.
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, in other countries,
people
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 behave the same way when they live in a foreign
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, and they do not lose their national identity.
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 can be a reason
of
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 strong parental influence because
people
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 like to work or act like how their
perents
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parents
,
grand parents
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grandparents
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 acted and they
also
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 need the same way of life their children to follow. In conclusion, while a few
people
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 have changed their thoughts, attitudes against their native
country
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’s
culture
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, many other
people
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 are unwillingly to change their original cultural behaviours. Even though there will be multi-cultural societies, cosmopolitan cities,
people
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 will follow the
culture
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 of the original
country
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.
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