Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is widely believed that building

skycrapers

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skyscrapers

in the

city

is important, while some people argue that improving

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schools

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shools

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schools

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and hospitals

is

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are

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more vital than spending

money

on making impressive buildings. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached. On the one hand, it can be seen that large and

well designed

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well-designed

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building

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buildings

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can attract tourists to visit the

city

.

Therefore

, the government in some countries has been spent a lot of

money

to improve the

city

by

buidling

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building

the

interested

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interesting

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places.

For example

, in Thailand, the

Baiyok

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Baiyoke

tower was built in order to attract foreigners.

As a result

, several tourists come and

visti

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visit

the tower, making

money

for Thai

peolple

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people

.

Furthermore

, creating places for tourism

also

increases the employment rate for local people.

On the other hand

, some communities may prefer protecting the old architecture.

Moreover

, they think that schools and hospitals are necessary to improve, as education and health care are the basic needs for societies.

For instance

, in some cities, the budget for providing the infrastructure

such

as

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a hospital

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hospital

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hospitals

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is less than that for building new tourism places.

Hence

, when the pandemic occurs, the

city

does not have enough space for patients. Clearly, in Bangkok during the covid-19 pandemic, people who got the virus have to stay at home, since there is no room in the hospital. In conclusion, both impressive buildings and improving schools and hospitals are essential for all cities. From my perspective, the

governer

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governor

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should pay

attendtion

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attention

to spend

money

on investing in these two areas equally so that the

city

could enhance the quality of living for

socieites

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societies

as well as luring more foreigners.