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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagre

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This
 chart illustrates the
percentage
 of residents’
usage
 type
such
 as fully owned and rented house of (England and Wales) period of 1918 to 2011. Overall, residential
usage
 of rented properties
percentage
 has gradually decline from between above period while
usage
percentage
 of the owned properties has increased significantly.
Year
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 of 1971
usage
 of both methods of residential
usage
percentage
 has equal comparing to other years. In
year
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 1918
percentage
 of the rented accommodation was marked about 76% and it declines gradually to 31% till
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 2001 and it increased minor parentage in 2011 by around 35%. During the same period owned ,household usages have increased from 22% in 1918 to 2001 till 69% and it dropped small amount as 65% in 2011.
Therefore
, rented houses and owned houses
usage
 has fluctuated in opposite directions as a wave. In
year
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 1971 both rented and owned resident
usage
 parentages are equal at 50% significantly while all others years
percentage
 fluctuate opposite directions in each time.
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