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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

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A number of
students
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 opt for a gap
year
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 prior to entering
university
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 for exploring the hobbies or have hands-on
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job
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 experience, is it fruitful for them or just time killing ,in my ,opinion it actually depends on how exactly they spend their
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 and I will highlight both the side of the issue in
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 essay. Now a day trend is going on,that
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 will take gap your before actually having a
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 education and each of the
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 has their own planning for the
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, how they utilise the precious one
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 period.some
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 are farsighted and in ,
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 they start planning for
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 period when they are in grade 11 or 12th ,start exploring what are the things they want to do ,where they are going to get funding for it with whom they are going to and all other details for an entire
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.If they are planning to have
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 experience,start getting recommendations and references so, as to get into it in a timely manner and investigate what actual
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 duties will be and how that work will enhance their planned
university
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 education and what kind of impact it should have in their future
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 profile after finishing the
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. In ,contrast the other half of the
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 randomly take
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 break without having any preparation for it which just lets them wander here and there ,neither they can focus on their hobby,nor do they have any actual work experience.
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 group remains in a state of chaos and at the end of the period they don't have anything in hand ,even they can't have any mental or physical break ,just time passed away means total loss of one important
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 of life. so, in
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 I would like to recommend either should not take the gap or if you want to take please use it wisely means you should have references from that
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 to show or activities to describe when someone asks what you did in that valuable
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