he two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two demonstrated maps demarcate differences in the roads near the city hospital between the years 2007 and 2010. There have been a host of changes in the structure of roads in the 3 years, and these changes are aimed to improve
the
traffic congestion and introduce more parking spaces.
The hospital lies to the North of the City Correct article usage
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road
and earlier there used to be an intersection on the Use synonyms
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is now replaced by a roundabout. The roundabout leads to the hospital Add an article
the intersection
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; The hospital lies on the end of Use synonyms
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, here too, there existed an intersection which has been replaced by a roundabout which leads to the hospital or continues on the ring Use synonyms
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which borders the hospital on all sides.
There existed bus stops on both sides of the hospital Use synonyms
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, but those are replaced now with a dedicated bus station, west of the hospital Use synonyms
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has been converted to a Use synonyms
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solely limited for the hospital staff and a new public Use synonyms
car
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park
has been instated at the east of the hospital along the ring Use synonyms
road
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