Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The vast majority of people are convinced that authorities should provide different types of financial support for outstanding artists and painters, while others believe that

art

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is not as important as other spheres.

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essay partially agrees with

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a viewpoint only partially, and

firstly

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it will discuss the importance of

art

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in society.

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, it will provide some arguments why the authorities should finance other social spheres rather than

art

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. Proponents argue that

governmental

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government

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support can be effective for

development

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the development

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in

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of

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music and

art

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. It is evident that if the government will not finance

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industry, it could lead to a lack of

art

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and culture. Undoubtedly, music and

art

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is

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are

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one

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of

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apply

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important parts of society, so there should be

financing

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the financing

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of these spheres.

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, in

Russia

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,Russia

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the government always supports various

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galleries and

theaters

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theatres

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because they are national attractions and millions of people visit them every year.

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, there are reasons why the financing of music and

art

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is not necessary at times by virtue of other most important sectors

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as medicine, education and

social

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society

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. It is clearly seen that many people are still below the poverty line without medicine and food.

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the importance of

art

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and culture, authorities should be dedicated to poverty or public facilities rather than focus on

art

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only. To conclude, I firmly believe that financial aid must be given

for

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to

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the culture and creative sector because

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part is quite important for nations,

however

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, I

also

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believe that the government should finance and develop other sectors rather than

art

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.