Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The vast majority of people are convinced that authorities should provide different types of financial support for outstanding artists and painters, while others believe that
art
is not as important as other spheres. This
essay partially agrees with such
a viewpoint only partially, and firstly
it will discuss the importance of art
in society. Secondly
, it will provide some arguments why the authorities should finance other social spheres rather than art
.
Proponents argue that governmental
support can be effective for Replace the word
government
development
Correct article usage
the development
in
music and Change preposition
of
art
. It is evident that if the government will not finance this
industry, it could lead to a lack of art
and culture. Undoubtedly, music and art
is
Change the verb form
are
one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
the
important parts of society, so there should be Correct article usage
apply
financing
of these spheres. Add an article
the financing
For instance
, in Russia
the government always supports various Add a comma
,Russia
art
galleries and theaters
because they are national attractions and millions of people visit them every year.
Change the spelling
theatres
However
, there are reasons why the financing of music and art
is not necessary at times by virtue of other most important sectors such
as medicine, education and social
. It is clearly seen that many people are still below the poverty line without medicine and food. Replace the word
society
Besides
the importance of art
and culture, authorities should be dedicated to poverty or public facilities rather than focus on art
only.
To conclude, I firmly believe that financial aid must be given for
the culture and creative sector because Change preposition
to
this
part is quite important for nations, however
, I also
believe that the government should finance and develop other sectors rather than art
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