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Increasing number of students are going to university instead of working after high school. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who do this.

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Universities are the places where learners can absorb
better
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 quality of education in a bid to have a bright future.
Therefore
, most of the pupils opt to pursue higher degrees rather than
accpting
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accepting
adopting
 a
job
.
This
 essay will make an attempt to shed some light on the pros before outlines the cons. To commence with,
first
 and foremost, today's world is quite competitive and cut-throat competition in the
job
 markets urges adolescents to
enroll
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 in their
further
 studies;
therefore
, to secure a
job
, they prefer to earn
post-secondary
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a post-secondary
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 education.
For instance
, there are some professions like teaching that demand superior knowledge in order to obtain a position,
such
 departments set tertiary discipline
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 the minimum standard to appear in the competitive exams.
Secondly
, higher standards students are very immature to work; most of them are
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teenagers who might be not well-prepared to expose themselves
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 the harsh realities of the world.
Then
, it would be too risky for them to deal with well-
experiend
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experienced
 folks;
such
 scenarios might develop
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 complex in them or they could lose their confidence in case of failures. Apart from that, some
job
 areas are arduous at
this
 age like work on the floor in f factories or on sites need more strength and skills that might be quite unsafe for them.
Therefore
, joining higher education institutes offer them wide knowledge,
experience
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 of the outer world. To conclude
then
, the
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 of
this
 phenomenon is higher than
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 as higher school pass outs are not experienced enough to face the outer realities; they need more knowledge to get
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competent in
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society.
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