Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory, job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People have different methods when they are trapped in a dilemma. Some believe that the exception is the best measure while others choose to facilitate or escape from
such
terrible situations. In my opinion, we should have an optimistic attitude no matter what we meet, and there always have available solutions for troubles.
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are two main reasons why people are inclined to adapt to a bad situation. The
first
objection is that they are incapable of changing some things.
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, individuals complain a lot about the overwork culture in the workforce.
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overworking damages our rights as an employee, but we do not dare obey these orders from our bosses due to the severe work competition. Another argument against
this
problem is that the gap between the rich and poor is ever-increasing since they were born. In spite
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points mentioned above, I believe that we should not give up when bad things are approaching us.
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, we have been endowed with abilities to solve problems since we were children. A person will go through numerous difficulties during his whole life, he could lead a hard life if he does not struggle to succeed.
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, accepting a bad situation means we suffer more in the future.
For example
, when we can not get on well with our colleagues, what we need to do is solve the contradiction between us rather than quit directly. In conclusion, the best way to deal with the trouble is to come up with an effective solution rather than escape it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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