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Cycling has many benefits, yet in some countries , there is a decrease in the number of people using bicycles as their main form of transportation . Why is it happening? Give suggestions on how to encourage people to use bicycles again.

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Cycling has considered
as
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a main type of
transport
 in many different countries due to its variety of benefits to
human
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.
However
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 it can be visible that, the persons who are using the bicycles have been decreased in some countries as their main form of
transport
. in
this
 essay, I will provide reasons
as
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 why is it happening and more important
suggessions
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suggestions
 to encourage
people
 to use bicycles again.
Firstly
,
this
 happens due to the advanced technology which has
occured
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occurred
 in the
transport
 sector and based on the
comfirtability
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comfortability
.
Thus
,
for
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all the members
in
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 the family cannot have the advantage of using the
bicyle
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bicycle
 at the same time.
Furthermore
, much more time will
required
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 for the
transport
 and it will be difficult in the busy life of
people
.
Secondly
, cycling
at
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 adverse weather conditions will
also
result
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inresult
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 negative impact on cycling.
However
, the
last
reaerch
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research
 held by World Health Organization reveals
tht
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that
the
 60% of
people
 who use cycling as the main
transport
 method has
less
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fewer
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 illnesses than the others.
Therefore
, it is because
of
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cycling will improve
the
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people
's health as it
burn
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 more calories.
Further
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 as it not required fuel to operate it gives
financially
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 benefits and as well as can be considered
as
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environmental
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 friendly.
Finally
, it can be concluded that it is much more important to encourage
people
 to use bicycles as it will increase the healthy lives of
people
.
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