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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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Nowadays, there are a lot of unemployed
people
 with high
university
degrees
 in many countries in the world. There are several reasons for
this
 issue and some measures can be taken to tackle
this
 problem. Several factors cause
this
 unemployment problem.
Firstly
, some companies or offices are looking for a person with
low
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 salary even if they
don’t
 have high
university
degrees
 and because
people
 with high
university
degrees
 often
don’t
 accept low salaries, they stay unemployed.
Secondly
, today,
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the graduate
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graduate
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 is just a factor of employment and another key factor is
skill
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 which we cannot find in all high
graduate
 students. Some
of
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high
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the high
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graduate
 students just study their lessons to pass the exam and get a good grade but when they
graduate
 and go to a job interview, they
don’t
 have enough skill to convince the boss to employ them. There are several steps
which
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 can be taken to mitigate
this
 issue. I believe that teaching future job’s skills
beside
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university
 courses can prepare them better for their future job and
this
 can affect their employment to have superiority against
people
 without high
university
degrees
 who have skill. Another way is that
people
 who are
high
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 qualified graduated reduce their expected salary in order to get employed. These days unemployed
people
specially
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 teenagers just think about earning money so they
don’t
 even think about jobs with mean or low income. In conclusion, some steps can be taken to solve
this
 issue
such
 as reducing expectations and start learning skills from
university
.
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