People can eat a wide variety of food of other regions. As a result they are eating a lot of foreign food instead of locally produced food.Do you think the advantages of eating foreign food are more than its harms?

Nowadays, supermarkets are stocked with
food
products from around the world.
As a result
,
people
are being lured towards foreign
food
, and are not consuming the local produce. I believe the disadvantages of imported
food
outweigh the advantages. On the positive side, the ready availability of
food
from across the globe gives us a lot of choices. We can taste a variety of fruits and vegetables from all parts of the world.
For example
, about ten years ago, we hardly saw Kiwi fruit, which is from Newzealand. But, now it has a place on every fruit stand.
Secondly
, many
people
get employment in
this
field. Small farmers have a chance to expand globally and
consequently
, it increases the overall economy of the country.
Finally
, it helps in developing good relations between countries, which helps in international cooperation and peace.If countries were dependent upon one another's economic success,
then
the armed conflict would be less likely.
On the other hand
, imported
food
can have a negative effect on the local farmers.Locally produced
food
would not be able to compete with international produce.So, the local economy would suffer and
people
would go for other better sources of livelihood than agriculture.The local culture would
also
be threatened.
This
can be seen in countries
such
as India where imported
food
has become more popular than traditional local produce, eroding
people
's understanding of the
food
traditions. Earlier
people
in India sat together to eat their traditional meals, but fast
food
is generally eaten alone sitting in front of the TV.
Although
those some would claim that
this
is a natural part of economic development, in an increasingly global world. I feel strongly that any loss of regional culture would be detrimental. Another major effect of imported
food
is the environmental cost. Currently, Mani
food
imports
such
as fruit, are transported thousands of miles by road, sea and air,making the product more expensive to buy, and increasing pollution from exhaust fumes. Despite the fact that trade in
food
export has existed for many years, I am convinced that a reduction would bring significant financial and environmental gains. In conclusion, I am certain  that if
people
ate locally produced
food
it would have environmental benefits. It would
also
benefit the local economy because, in time,
people
would prosper commercially as the demand for  local and regional produce would remain high resisting the competition from overseas.
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