Some students argue that internet-based lectures is better type of lectures. The other argue that university-based lectures still needed. Please explain both sides and give your opinion on it

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time
, especially since
pandemic
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, online courses is one of the solutions
which
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given by the
university
to replace
face
to
face
learning. The question
then
rise, should the
students
attend
this
type of lecture permanently even after the pandemic is over or should they come back to
university
. In
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I will cover
both
pros and cons of each
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and summarize them based on my thinking. Website-based learning offers more advantages for
both
of
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the
students
and the lecturers in
term
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terms
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of the
flexibilities
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of their learning process.
Firstly
, online lectures will help
both
parties to spend less
time
in the preparations. By having the activities in their own home, unlike with the offline learnings, it will reduce the
traveling
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time
to
university
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.
Thus
, the remaining
time
could be
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for other important things
such
as reading the materials and preparing the tasks.
Secondly
, internet-based courses allow the
students
and lecturers
joining
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to join
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the program from any
places
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place
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they want
,
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so that they could continue their program while still spending more
time
with their
family
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families
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. Research suggested that people with more family support will have
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grade
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in their education compared to the people with less support.
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the other hand, classroom-based learning is not all negative, it
also
brings positive impacts to the pupils.
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type
of course
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will boost
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of the
students
because they will get more attention they need from the lecturer in the
face
to
face
meeting compared with the online one.
In addition
, they will have more social interactions with their fellow classmates which can
also
boost their learning spirit. Another reason that could benefit the parties from
offline
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course is that it is independent
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internet coverage and gadget utilization.
Students
with low access
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the internet or sophisticated gadget will still
able
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to follow the
proceses
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process
processes
well.
Both
online and offline lectures have their own advantages and disadvantages. So, it is important that the
university
could give choices to the
students
and lecturers whether or not they would proceed
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educational program with internet-based courses based on their own assessment of their needs.
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