Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?”
Certain educational professionals opine that it would be advantageous if teenagers start commanding a foreign language at primary levels
instead
of secondary schools. I strongly condemn Linking Words
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statement, as kids are already over-burdened by the existing education system. Linking Words
Firstly
, we will discuss the drastic impact of Linking Words
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on children and Linking Words
secondly
, we will explain how it is going to be a bane rather than a boon.
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To begin
with, students nowadays are facing immense societal along with performance pressure and implementing the above-stated idea would definitely add fuel to fire. Linking Words
Furthermore
, it would be expecting a lot from a six years old boy to become multi-lingual. We should not forget that primary schools were established to nurture kids by enhancing their creativity, not to convert their brains into pressure cookers. Linking Words
For instance
, my niece went to a public junior creche and learnt moral as well as ethical values, whereas her brother later went to a convent primary school but could not perform well in exams as was crushed under a load of multiple activities. Linking Words
Thus
, it is evident that junior age is to cherish the lovely time, which should not be spoiled by adding unnecessary activities to it.
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On the other hand
, it is no doubt that language is a wine over lips, but teenage is not an appropriate time to taste Linking Words
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Additionally
, there is a limited scope of learning a non-native speech, which at least cannot be decided at Linking Words
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a young age. Linking Words
For example
, I learnt French in my school, but after growing up, I opted for Linking Words
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a profession that has no scope in France. Linking Words
Also
, we have a facility of Google translator in case we need to communicate if we are travelling to a foreign destination or talking to them. Linking Words
Therefore
, we certainly can say that the purview of learning an additional language is reducing with the emerging technology and is turning out to be a useless asset for everyone.
To conclude, looking at the negatives and limited worth of any new lingual, Linking Words
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ideology would be unfair for toddlers to acquaint themselves with an overseas speech. I do believe that the disadvantages definitely outweigh the advantages.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...