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The percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and whales between 1918 to 2011.

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The graph illustrates the proportion of households by rented and owning properties in the UK during the
year
 1918 to 2011. Overall, it is crystal clear that the rented accommodation has a consistent decline whereas, owned households have a compatible increasing trend since 1918 to 2001, in 2011 a bit change has been seen in both the accommodation to their opposite side.
To begin
 with, owned housing in England and Wales had an upward trend from the beginning of 20th century to 2001 i.e., around the lowest 22% to highest 68% except for the
year
 1953 which was 32% exactly the same as in the
year
 1939.
also
, a slight downfall has been seen, which is near about 64% in the
year
 2011.
On the other hand
, rented lodging in the British nation has a downward trend, in 1918 the proportion was most popular with 75% and a slight decrease of 8% in 1939 resulted in 68% in 1953 as well were liable to pay for their accommodation.
moreover
, from 1961 to 2001 a fall have seen from 58% to the smallest percentage 32% and a bit incline touch the figure to 35% in 2011.
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