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In many cities, the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime. Many people believe that installing CCTV cameras is the best way to prevent crimes from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many major cities across the world are increasing their usage of
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cameras
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 as a crime deterrent.
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 some may object that
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 intrudes on people's privacy, I believe that the benefits of utilizing video
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 to increase
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 surpass the downsides. When it comes to the disadvantages of employing
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cameras
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 to discourage crime, some individuals think that their personal freedom is interfered
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 because their activities are continually monitored by these devices. Images of their faces and movements will be captured and sent to
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 organizations, ready to be analyzed if required, whether they are out on the street, at shopping malls, or at subway stations. Many individuals believe that
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 is an invasion of privacy and that privacy is a right that should be appreciated in today's environment. Despite the aforementioned considerations, I feel that the benefits of
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cameras
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 to our society surpass the disadvantages. Widespread
surveillance
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 in public places will significantly reduce crime by discouraging potential criminals from participating in illegal acts when they are aware that
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cameras
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 are watching their every move. More video
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 in public locations
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 aid in the reduction of terrorist acts, since the data and pictures from these
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 are utilized to detect odd actions of any people in public spaces.
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 aids in the defense of society and offers a sense of safety and
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 to its citizens. In conclusion, despite the notion that growing the usage of
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 camera systems will infringe on individual liberty, I would say that the
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cameras
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