Some people say that school children should be given individual class work, while others think that working in small groups is better for them. Discuss both approaches and include your own opinion.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether
kids
should execute their
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by themselves at school or working together with few colleagues. In
this
essay, I am going to examine
this
question from both points of view and
then
explain why I believe the arguments for
kids
working in small groups are stronger. There are people who argue that the benefits of studying alone considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
this
is that children will be
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familiar
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own fears,
such
as nervousness. It is
also
possible to say that working alone will help to develop children’s imagination due to the extent search
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solutions for school activities and small problems. To illustrate, Fulano Ciclando
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created the Tesla when he was trying to solve his school’s project.
On the other hand
, others believe that pupils could reach better results if they study in groups. It is often argued that social skills
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one of the most important attributes of
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, mainly in
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adulthood. People often have
this
opinion because
kids
would be able to expand their ideas through conversations and each one will have the opportunity to learn indirectly with their colleagues. A
second
point is that working in
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always will be important
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of individuals.
For example
, in the
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business
where many roles
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good social skills to treat with partners and clients. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,
however
, I feel that it is important to
kids
working with
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group
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.
This
is because in future they will be capable of leading well with people and
also
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familial
with challenges.
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