level of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the word what are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.

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Juvenile
crimes are increasing day by day.
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aware
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the penalties, crime rates are not coming down.
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of students could be a threat
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the society in future.
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essay will discuss the major reasons
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this
problem and possible solutions
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this
particular problem.
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internet addiction
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also
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vital role.
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, a research report from Punjab University, India showed that
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social
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media
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medias
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like
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and
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WhatsApp
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students aged between twelve to seventeen.
In addition
, another research conducted by Rajiv Gandhi University proved that
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the children of working partners are likely to commit more mistakes
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when compared with
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working
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. To summarize, the unnoticeable circumstances insisting a
child
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commit
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the offense
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of a
child
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basic life values.
This
can be easily implemented by the grandparents in the house during each stage of a kid's development. Along with
this
, the parents should spend some quality time with their children irrespective of their busy schedules.
Besides
everything, it is mandatory to observe the
child
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the internet.
Likewise
, both the parents and teachers should help the
child
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them to grow as a socially acceptable human being.
Finally
, it is the ultimate responsibility of the parents to direct the
child
to the right way.
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • youth crime
  • increasing rapidly
  • socioeconomic factors
  • breakdown of family structure
  • influence of peer pressure
  • lack of education
  • lack of employment opportunities
  • substance abuse
  • inadequate law enforcement
  • media and technology
  • poverty
  • inequality
  • gang culture
  • juveniles
  • criminal behavior
  • delinquency
  • criminal activities
  • antisocial behavior
  • youth offenders
  • recidivism
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