Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There has been an ongoing debate whether the

government

or the

parents

are accountable for

obesity

in kids.

Fast

Add a hyphen

Fast-food

show examples

food

chains have been blooming,

therefore

, it is undeniable that

government

plays a role in

this

cause.

Nonetheless

, being the primary contact of the children,

parents

are the

first

defence against

this

problem, which I firmly agree

.

Change preposition

with.

show examples

On the one hand, those who support the idea of

government

Correct article usage

the government

show examples

being responsible for children’s

obesity

point to the increase in

promotion

Correct article usage

the promotion

show examples

of sweets and fast

food

on television.

For example

, it should not be allowed to advertise unhealthy foods on kids’ channels.

Furthermore

, the

government

should

also

implement a rule to ban junk

food

at school canteens so that children cannot access behind

parents

’ surveillance.

Finally

, cheap and accessible fast

food

is enhancing the ease of reach,

hence

, higher taxes should be imposed on them which could lead to less frequent consumptions from consumers.

By contrast

, people who agree that

parents

are in charge of

obesity

of their offspring, state that

parents

should take the time to prepare nutritious

food

for their kids.

For instance

, preparing

home cooked

Add a hyphen

home-cooked

show examples

lunch boxes is a good way to refrain children from purchasing fattening

food

at school.

Additionally

, educating of the consequences of consuming fast

food

is

also

ideal to discourage youths from taking a liking to it. As

a

Change the article

the

show examples

last

point, it is

also

true that most kids prefer to spend their leisure time watching television or playing video games, involving little movements, which is why the guardians must encourage more physical activities for children’s physical health. To summarise, in my opinion, the stronger argument is in favour of the chances of

obesity

belonging to the

parents

, with all the factors of preparing meals and influencing to participate in physical movements. Without a doubt, the

government

should

also

be involved in deterring easy access to unhealthy

food

by imposing higher taxes, banning junk

food

commercials on children’s television channels, and refrain selling fast

food

at canteens.