Crime rates among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

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Our society has been dealing with different misdeeds for a long time. The rate of
criminal
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offence by youngsters has escalated drastically in
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of nations. There are several causes behind
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including lack of moral
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. My subsequent crumb of writing will elaborate the same with relevant examples and how parents and schools can help to prevent
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with, most
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the
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young people lack moral
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and basic
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. They do not interact with their elders much due to which they lack
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social
behavior
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manners.
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, learning institutes
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focus on other subjects and do not
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prioritize
building the character of a student.
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, they do not get the environment that could bring out the best of them in terms of ethics and social
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.
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could result in
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of laws by them. To counter
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issue, parents should pledge to interact more with them to know if they are ethically inclined or not. In fact, differentiating the consequences of good and bad deeds will help youth to become
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better
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, schools should introduce moral
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in their curriculum so that teenagers
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focus on building a strong character that can prevent them to commit
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a crime
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crime
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in the future.
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, many educational institutes in India conduct separate classes that
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on moral learning so that more and more law-abiding citizens are produced. To conclude, parents and schools can play a huge role in decreasing the crimes committed by the youngsters by giving appropriate
education
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. Though violation of laws has risen tremendously
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it can be tackled by taking the
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steps.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Juvenile delinquency
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Parental supervision
  • Peer influence
  • Dysfunctional family
  • Desensitization
  • Substance abuse
  • Educational opportunities
  • Employment prospects
  • Preventive measures
  • Rehabilitation programs
  • Community involvement
  • Policy interventions
  • Mental health support
  • Crime deterrence
  • Media exposure
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