Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

Nowadays, people are mainly

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relay

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on the media to get

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update

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on their

surrounding

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. No one can deny that

private

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life of famous figures is a heavy topic across those platforms. I

personaly

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personally

think that

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excessive proportion is giving the readers more negative influences. In

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essay, I will cover the reasons

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my opinion. Heavy portions of the celebrities

lifes

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which are covered in the media will give a lot of disadvantages for the readers.

First

of all,

this

imbalanced news will make the audiences less exposed

with

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any other important headlines.

For example

, the news of

a

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dangerous criminal activity in the magazine will not be red by them due to the article was placed in some corner of

a random pages

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, while the story of a celebrity scandal was in all over the front page and some pages after that.

Secondly

, the massive coverage of

this

type

of story will lead to more exposure to the children.

Thus

, the children will obsess over them and take

this

public figure as a reference for their life without knowing which aspect is right and which one is wrong.

Lastly

, the imbalanced proportions of the news in the platforms will

then

lead to a shifting need of society for

informations

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information

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.

For instance

, with the massive number of public figure stories, people will crave

for

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the same

type

of information more and think that the other

type

of topics

are

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unimportant.

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condition will lead to a

small minded

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society that could be dangerous because they are unaware

to

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their surrounding

issues

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. In summary, the dangerous unbalanced

type

of

knowledges

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knowledge

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in

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magazines, televisions, newspapers, and

internet

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will bring more

dissadvantages

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disadvantages

to

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society.

Therefore

, there are

needs

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for the government to supervise more strictly the content of those platforms before they reach their audiences.