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Many scientists are concerned about global warming. Research shows that the worldwide increase in temperature is getting worse. Furthermore, global warming seems to be related to levels of pollution in the atmosphere. Discuss the causes of global warming and possible solutions to the problem.

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Human activities and industrialisation have drastically affected our
environment
. Global warming is one of the greatest problems in the world, the rise in the earth
temperature
 is becoming a huge issue and
this
 is directly related to the pollution levels in the
environment
. In
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 I am going to discuss in detail the problem. An increase in the use of fossil fuel adds directly to greenhouse gases level which affects the level of the ozone layer which acts as an insulation from solar energy and helps to maintain global
temperature
 any factors disturbing
this
 will add up to global warming.Industrial emissions are going up day by day which is a direct threat to the global
environment
,improper disposal of household and animal waste is another fact attributing to greenhouse gases. To deal with global
temperature
 is most in-demand need of today's era and it is everyone's responsibility to help in dealing with
this
 worldwide treat,In ,addition government should make policies for pollution control and promote
environment
-friendly vehicles and technologies. Scientists are encouraging people to re-use,recycle and reduce harmful products for the
environment
. Maximum use of solar energy and photoelectric techniques can drastically decrease the use of fossil fuels. In, summary global warming and rising
temperature
 is a direct threat to humans, fauna and flora so government and society should come together in every possible way to tackle
this
 worldwide problem.
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