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In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, scientific researches suggest to readers that the
lifespan
 is increasing day by day. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the pros and cons and
then
 I will
explein
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explain
 the reason why I think that it is not good as
the
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people
 used to believe.
Firstly
, I think that
this
 kind of process interests few countries due to the fact that in many zones of the world the life expectancy is low and there is a huge difference between developed and not-developed countries.
However
, the
lifespan
 is raising and today the
people
 expected to live until 80 more or less,
on the contrary
, if we think about 100 years ago the life expectancy was accounted around 50/60 that means that it is increased by 50% approximately. The fact is caused by the change of lifestyle, the improvement in healthcare and
also
 the
developing
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in
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medecine
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medicine
.
Although
 some
people
 would like to
increasing
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 more the
lifespan
, I believe that during the
last
 years of our life, we had done all the things that we wanted to do as a consequence that
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,
for example
, over 100 could be extremely boring and
problably
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probably
 we will have several pain due to the old age.
Moreover
, the economy will suffer due to the fact that old
people
 are one of the greatest
expenditure
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 for the government. In conclusion, I believe that living forever or to have more than 100 years could be boring and
painfull
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painful
, in
contraddiction
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contradiction
, several
people
 hope to increase their
lifespan
 because they would like to live as much as possible but it is dangerous
also
 for the economy of countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • demographics
  • societal development
  • healthcare system
  • pension funds
  • multigenerational
  • workforce
  • economic sustainability
  • intergenerational inequality
  • longevity
  • proactive policy
  • geriatrics
  • senior citizens
  • ageing population
  • fertility rates
  • dependency ratio
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