In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, scientific researches suggest to readers that the
lifespan
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is increasing day by day. In
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I will
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explain
the reason why I think that it is not good as
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people
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used to believe.
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, I think that
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kind of process interests few countries due to the fact that in many zones of the world the life expectancy is low and there is a huge difference between developed and not-developed countries.
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, the
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is raising and today the
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expected to live until 80 more or less,
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, if we think about 100 years ago the life expectancy was accounted around 50/60 that means that it is increased by 50% approximately. The fact is caused by the change of lifestyle, the improvement in healthcare and
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medicine
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some
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would like to
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more the
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, I believe that during the
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years of our life, we had done all the things that we wanted to do as a consequence that
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,
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, over 100 could be extremely boring and
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probably
we will have several pain due to the old age.
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, the economy will suffer due to the fact that old
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are one of the greatest
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for the government. In conclusion, I believe that living forever or to have more than 100 years could be boring and
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painful
, in
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, several
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hope to increase their
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because they would like to live as much as possible but it is dangerous
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for the economy of countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • demographics
  • societal development
  • healthcare system
  • pension funds
  • multigenerational
  • workforce
  • economic sustainability
  • intergenerational inequality
  • longevity
  • proactive policy
  • geriatrics
  • senior citizens
  • ageing population
  • fertility rates
  • dependency ratio
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