You recently bought an electronic item from a store, but it stopped working within a few days. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter: •Describe the item •Explain the problem •Say what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a recent purchase I made at your store regarding a Samsung wireless Bluetooth speaker that I bought on May 10th. To give you some background, I purchased the speaker from your downtown branch and was assured of its excellent quality and performance.

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, within just three days of use, the device stopped functioning entirely. Despite being fully charged, it neither connects to any device nor emits sound. I have double-checked the manual and tried troubleshooting methods, but the problem persists. I would appreciate it if you could either replace the faulty item with a new one or provide a full refund. I have attached a copy of the receipt and warranty card with

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letter. Please let me know how to proceed with the return and replacement process. Thank you for your attention to

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matter. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Alex Thompson

onlineconsumerFri May 23 2025

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph contains a clear main idea and supporting details.

task achievement

Make sure to include a brief introduction to state the purpose of the letter more clearly.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear introduction and conclusion, which is good for flow.

task achievement

The tone is polite, which is excellent for a complaint letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

157 words

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