By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.
It is generally said that
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the death
penalty
is a barbarian punishment even though the prisoner is a murderer or has performed serious assaults agains
other humans. Plenty of Correct your spelling
against
people
argue that,
in order to be more civilized we must seek Remove the comma
apply
for
better ways of reforming Change preposition
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criminals
while others claim that liberating society from those people
is a better option. I personally feel that the death
penalty
is one of the worst punishments for criminals
, this
essay will discuss my opinion and the
social implications Change the word
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of
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it
.
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First
and foremost, criminals
with charges for killing must be punished for a long time, the worst penalty
for someone is a lifetime in confinement. While the death
penalty
is a useful manner of releasing society of criminals
like murders or rapist
, it is a short term punishment that would release that person from any other type of sanction. Fix the agreement mistake
rapists
Furthermore
, the person injecting the letal
dose will become Correct your spelling
lethal
legal
also
a homicide and, if the prisoner turns out to be innocent after further
police investigation, family members of the suspect will present legal demands against Add an article
a further
the further
law
and governments. A more useful Correct article usage
the law
penalty
for a killer, after ensure
his implication in the crime, would be a lifetime in prison but in confinement, without interaction with other Change the verb form
ensuring
people
. Some will argue that this
castigation is more inhumane since a human being in complete isolation could become insane but, drawing from their charges it would not be a terrible sentence.
Another situation to take into consideration is that,
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behavior
and even in prison their presence is dangerous for the other inmates. There are different types of crimes and sometimes prisoners find redemption throughout their life behind bars, but Change the spelling
behaviour
this
situation is only possible when the criminal performed a low standard crime. For instance
, a penniless man who assault
a store to buy food for their family is likely to shortage his sentence and do not hurt anyone inside prison. Change the verb form
assaults
However
, in the case of killers or people
who perform worst
crimes, the possibility of redemption is almost inexistent. Reaffirming my position, I do not think that we must end their lives, Correct article usage
the worst
instead
, we must create a
worst punishment so in the future other Correct article usage
the
criminals
think twice before committing such
terrible actions.
All things considered, killing someone else is a terrible action for every human no matter against
who is performed. For Change preposition
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this
reason, I would argue that the death
penalty
must not be a
legal action in any country, Remove the article
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instead
, new forms of penalization should be implemented accordingly
to the crime and with proper judgment in front of justice.Submitted by ali_helenagall_98 on
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