In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this? do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In recent decades, due to industry developments and growing technology, we see many advertisements on TV, website, etc. which are about a new product in some businesses.
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those may not be new creative goods or services, the advertisement emphasizes that are new. I think
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type of advertising can help to increase the sale rate but has several pros and cons as well. On the
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hand, when a product is the newest
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, It can be more attractive and folk enthusiastic knowing it.
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, businesses attempt to produce new productions or even solely introduce them as new property.
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, many electronic gadgets like smartwatches and phones come to the market as the
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in new generation and most of the time
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product is bought unexpectedly because of
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that are eager to know and have it.
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, when businesses produce new products or even advertising their goods that are new, it can increase the consumerism rate in the society that it has several consequences.
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, Samsung and Apple companies release new smartphones to the market annually that in their advertising they talk about some of the new features. So many
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tend to buy the new
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because of its new features
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as its camera or screen resolution.
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, not only do
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spend a noticeable amount of money just to be updated but
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increase wastes dramatically. to conclude,
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producing and introducing new products can boost
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's lives in many aspects, producing and purchasing new goods should be controlled by producers and consumers as well. its main reason is that helps to protect our environments.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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