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In 10 years the world will change dramatically.Do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed by many
people
 that the
world
 will totally change in a decade;
however
, some
people
 argue that it will still be the same in ten
years
. In my opinion, I generally agree that
this
 planet will be significantly different in the future.
First
 of all, a human being will still exist as it is used to.
Although
 there are many environmental problems these days,
people
finally
 find a way to survive.
Moreover
, it is predicted that the
world
's population are rising triple in a few
years
, according to a recent news report. So, human is definitely still alive in 10
years
.
On the other hand
, some
people
 believe that there are several factors that contribute much to changes in our planet. The most common aspect is that a technological breakthrough will dramatically disrupt the ways of
people
's living.
For instance
, in the USA, mobile phones recently can connect to every appliance in citizens' houses and can be controlled by human's voices.
This
 helps
people
 live their lives easier than before.
Furthermore
, it is forecasted that our
world
's society is going to be developed rapidly by technology in a decade. The way humans
work
 will
also
 be changed as there is an increase in the number of
people
 who
work
 from their homes. Since many
softwares
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software
 have been created by developers, office workers can now communicate through applications
such
 as Zoom, WebEx, and so on. In a few
years
, most of the
world
's population will
work
 remotely from their houses and visit their workplaces just once a week, according to an online survey. To sum up, I feel that
although
 there is a clear aspect that humans will still exist, technology will absolutely change
this
world
 and
people
 will switch to
work
 from their home. In my opinion, I think that our earth is mostly transformed in a decade.
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