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In 10 years the world will change dramatically.Do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed by many
people
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 that the
world
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 will totally change in a decade;
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, some
people
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 argue that it will still be the same in ten
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. In my opinion, I generally agree that
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 planet will be significantly different in the future.
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 of all, a human being will still exist as it is used to.
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 there are many environmental problems these days,
people
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finally
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 find a way to survive.
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, it is predicted that the
world
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's population are rising triple in a few
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, according to a recent news report. So, human is definitely still alive in 10
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.
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, some
people
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 believe that there are several factors that contribute much to changes in our planet. The most common aspect is that a technological breakthrough will dramatically disrupt the ways of
people
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's living.
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, in the USA, mobile phones recently can connect to every appliance in citizens' houses and can be controlled by human's voices.
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 helps
people
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 live their lives easier than before.
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, it is forecasted that our
world
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's society is going to be developed rapidly by technology in a decade. The way humans
work
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 will
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 be changed as there is an increase in the number of
people
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 who
work
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 from their homes. Since many
softwares
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software
 have been created by developers, office workers can now communicate through applications
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 as Zoom, WebEx, and so on. In a few
years
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, most of the
world
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's population will
work
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 remotely from their houses and visit their workplaces just once a week, according to an online survey. To sum up, I feel that
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 there is a clear aspect that humans will still exist, technology will absolutely change
this
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world
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 and
people
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 will switch to
work
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 from their home. In my opinion, I think that our earth is mostly transformed in a decade.
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