These days many children spend a lot of their time playing computer games but little time doing sports. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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of advancement in technology ,youngsters have replaced their habits of participating in sports activity by indulging

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computer games. The main reason for

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of availability of playgrounds and

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trend imposes a detrimental

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physical and psychological development.

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with, it is been observed that

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of playgrounds for youngsters and adults are

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deteriorating

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is because, with the increase in population and urbanisation ,much space is being occupied for residential and commercial

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, cities and towns are becoming concrete jungles which

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not encourage outdoor activities to take place. To exemplify, the recent survey by the Times Now showed that

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population has upsurged in

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5 years to 50 % which led to cutting on playgrounds and parks.

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increased trend of prolonged use of computer technology games is encouraging a negative

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on the development of

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child's

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physical and mental health.

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is to say that, the youngsters are leading more of a sedentary lifestyle than ever before.

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,

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of physical sports is leading to

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of

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exercise

and body fitness. Another important factor is that

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staring on screens is leading to

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mental instability and weak eyesight. To illustrate, the current survey done by one health NGO showed that there is an increase in more than 60 % of young people who are facing problems of obesity in recent times. To conclude, it is true that

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use of computer screens is having an obstructive

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on adult's and

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children's

physical and mental health and the main reason contributing to

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of space for them to play outdoor games.