Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The below layout plans illustrate the existing and future development proposal of the University
sports
centre. Overall, the two outdoor courts have been replaced significantly with a leisure pool and new
sports
hall while the indoor pool and facilities keep remains. The proposed plan for the
sports
centre has two main parts compared to the existing layout. In fact, the west
side
has proposed the leisure pool along with the new changing room and
sports
shops on the south
side
. On the west
side
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outdoor courts have been replaced with a new
sports
hall, two dance studios, changing room and
also
with café.
However
, the middle of the
sports
centre keeps secure existing arrangements while both
side
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of the outdoor centres has developed. But the main entrance along with the reception has improved with the south-west
side
sports
shop and the south-east
side
café while keeping access for the west and east
side
of the new
sports
areas.
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