People nowadays spend their free time less actively than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

Development of communications
affect
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affects

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people
to spend their free
time
on computer or mobile phone more than others
activities
,
in particular
online and offline games, social media, and entertainment programs.
However
, there are many reasons lead to believe that
people
nowadays spend their free
time
more activity than in the past through co-space and widely expanding
an information
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information
a piece of information

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from a social network. To start off, co-spaces nowadays are constructed on available areas, parks, or in buildings, these are placed in both rural and city where
people
easily visit and take part in many
activities
there. The co-spaces provide
wide
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a wide

The noun phrase wide range seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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range of aged and type
activities
such
as cooking, artificial hiking, VR gaming, drawing, event swimming. These can convince
people
to do much more
activities
than in the past.
Furthermore
, it is
new
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a new
the new

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era of communication.
People
are able to access
to
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apply

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many
activities
from the whole world through
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the internets

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internets
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internet

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and social
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media

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medias
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media

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.
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These

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Theses
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These

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make
people
want to try to copy or do
somethings
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something

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new as they have never seen
on
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in

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their countries, but already seen
from
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it from

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the internets

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internets
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Internet

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and social
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media

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medias
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media

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. For
examples
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example

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,
sketboard
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skateboard
keyboard

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is
sport
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a sport

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that was
speaded
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speeded
suspended

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from the west and it is popular nowadays as a free
time
activity because famous
people
recorded a video clip,
then
post
on
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it on

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social
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media

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medias
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media

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. To sum up, I disagree that
people
nowadays spent their free
time
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timeless

The word time less seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.

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less
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fewer

It appears that the quantifier less does not fit with the countable noun activities. Consider changing the quantifier or the noun.

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activities
than on the past because there are co-space in every
areas
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area

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that provide varieties of
activities
, and internet and social network convince
people
to do more different
activities
.
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