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STUDYING THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE IN AN ENGLISH-SPEAKING COUNTRY IS THE BEST BUT NOT ONLY THE WAY TO LEARN THE LANGUAGE. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

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Some people believe that studying
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 speaking nation is
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, there are various ways to acquire the knowledge. I agree that there are several ways to of gaining
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, some foreign students go abroad to live
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 to get acquainted with their culture and native
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. They stay with a host family who communicates in the
language
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 of their choice and they may gradually get familiar with the
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, a foreign student gets accustomed
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 when they associate themselves with people. Travelling overseas is one of the acceptable
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 of understanding an unfamiliar
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, there are different ways of acquiring skills which are making new friends with other students and browsing information online. Most people feel comfortable in
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 of friends unlike when they are in class and
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 contributes to easy learning.
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, downloading
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 speaking
movie
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 online provides a better means to understand a
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 being spoken. Academicians
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 to look up
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new words they heard
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dictionary
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 and
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 gives room to know the meaning of the spoken word and helps to increase vocabulary building.
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, an individual who watches an international movie frequently develops his speaking skills faster. In conclusion, learning
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 speaking nation is good but there are other means of acquiring knowledge
is
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 applied. I agree that there
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 numerous
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 of gaining an understanding
towards
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 which are making new friends and sourcing data online.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
  • progress
  • motivated
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