In some countries, it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they seven or eight. How far you agree with either of these views?
It is undeniable that many
parents
at the present are sending their Use synonyms
children
to start Use synonyms
school
at four Use synonyms
years
old in some countries, but some people argue that Use synonyms
children
should enrol the formal education at seven or eight Use synonyms
years
old. From my point of view, I agree with the Use synonyms
first
viewpoint rather than the Linking Words
second
idea. In the following paragraph, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in the detail.
In my opinion, I think that some Linking Words
parents
have many reasons for starting Use synonyms
school
at eight Use synonyms
years
old of their Use synonyms
children
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For instance
, they can take care of their Linking Words
kids
by themselves due to they a full-time housewife, Use synonyms
firstly
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Secondly
, the preschool enrollment must be used a lot of money for some families which they cannot support . Linking Words
Furthermore
, they think that the early Linking Words
school
may make their Use synonyms
kids
not happy.
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However
, many researchers said that Linking Words
children
at four Use synonyms
years
old are the best learning age, and the attendance in the preschool of Use synonyms
children
is the preparation for Use synonyms
children
before they go to elementary Use synonyms
school
due to they can learn more and more the important things, Use synonyms
such
as how to make new relationship, self-help without their Linking Words
parents
and learning some basic knowledge. Use synonyms
Additionally
, modern Linking Words
parents
nowadays do not have time to take care of their Use synonyms
kids
due to they have full-time jobs. Use synonyms
As a result
, they will send their Linking Words
kids
to the preschool for the teachers to teach their Use synonyms
kids
and they think that the babysitters may be useless for their Use synonyms
children
because they may not have many experiences to teach their Use synonyms
kids
in the right way which is different from the teachers.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the Use synonyms
first
idea because it is the preparation process for the younger, and young people can learn a lot of knowledge at the preschool. Linking Words
Therefore
, it is recommended that the state government should support the money for young people to take them into the preschool to create readiness for Linking Words
children
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