You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: • explain your situation • describe the accommodation you require • say when you will need it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
to consult you about the accommodation near the college. My name is Lena Yang and I am going on a short course at your college for three months.
Currently, I am looking for a place to live in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. However
, I could not find enough information for making a decision. Therefore
, I would like to ask you whether you could give me some suggestions about the lodge near the campus.
I prefer to live in a one-bedroom apartment, which the price range is between $150 and $200 per week. Moreover
, a kitchen room is necessary because I love cooking.
Furthermore
, since my class may finish late at night, I would rather stay in the female dorm located within a walking distance.
I would be appreciated if you could give me all information within
the end of June, as I will arrive Change preposition
by
in
there on Saturday Change preposition
apply
1st
of August. Correct article usage
the 1st
Additionally
, it would be great if I would get the room on that day.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Lena YangSubmitted by kanokwann.joy on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.