Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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really enriches our lives. Since it has not a single style, Use synonyms
people
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songs
in almost every situation based on their mood. Use synonyms
However
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although
some individuals believe that today’s Linking Words
music
has positive effects on the young, Use synonyms
the
others including myself think that it has more downsides.
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music
, many young Use synonyms
people
have Use synonyms
attracted
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been attracted
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to
music
styles. As they have been created with excellent melodies, Use synonyms
people
are more likely to listen to them frequently. Use synonyms
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music
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people
’s life. Use synonyms
Although
the words are hard to comprehend, they enjoy them listening which helps them to set or change their mood. Linking Words
Therefore
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current
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the current
music
style has somewhat helped Use synonyms
the
young Correct article usage
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people
to enjoy themselves. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, there are more negative effects associated with it.
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repercussions
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the repercussions
music
, lyrics and the beat play Use synonyms
the
major role. Unlike in the past, nowadays, Correct article usage
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songs
do not have meaningful lyrics, and mostly give a bad impression to the young. When they listen to Use synonyms
them
most of the time, they will probably have Correct your spelling
the
a
bad behaviour. Remove the article
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In addition
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two-three
decades ago, Correct your spelling
two three
songs
were calm and peaceful. After Use synonyms
listening
those Add the preposition
tolistening
songs
, Use synonyms
people
were over the moon, and they did not get confused with the beat. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, today’s Linking Words
music
has Use synonyms
very
fast beat, Add an article
a very
as a result
of listening to them, the young have become hyperactive which is detrimental for them.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
modern-day Linking Words
music
has some benefits Use synonyms
on
the young, I firmly believe that Change preposition
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disadvatages
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disadvantages
outwiegh
the advantages. Correct your spelling
outweigh
Therefore
, we should appropriately select what to listen Linking Words
since
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to since
music
plays a significant role in our life.Use synonyms
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