There are some motives for people to work. Some people think money is the most important. Do you agree or disagree?
Despite several motivations to work, money is considered the fundamental and the most essential one. I certainly agree with the statement and
this
essay will discuss the reaons
for my agreement followed by a logical conclusion.
Correct your spelling
reasons
Firstly
, the reason why despite many other factors, money is considered the most inluential
one is its actual Correct your spelling
influential
requirment
in the real world. It means with the increase in an average expenditure of an individual the Correct your spelling
requirement
apetite
of money is Correct your spelling
appetite
also
inclining which makes people to
work harder just to achieve success and Change the verb form
apply
a
higher remuneration. Other factors Remove the article
apply
such
as job satisfaction, designation
may motivate the people but not as much as the salary.Add an article
the designation
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite