Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible, while others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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that
kids
have to start their learning in
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schools
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since early
years
, but some people are convinced that they should start exploring after reaching 7
years
old.
This
essay agreed it is worthier for
children
to
starting
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getting
education
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earlier.
This
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children
can receive information and learn
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and why giving them
time
to spend their childhood might be important.
Kids
has
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opportunity
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the opportunity
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to learn and explore very well. I mean their brain is fresh and ready to investigate something new.
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, often skills that
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improved by
person
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a person
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as
kid
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a kid
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are becoming great people.
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, it
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it
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worthier for
children
starting
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learning and discovering the world
since
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early
years
.
For instance
, Amadeus Mozart who learned
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piano
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when he was 3
years
old reached a lot of impressive achievements.
However
,
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children
childrens
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children
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should
spent
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their own
time
as
kids
. Giving him
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in
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his age may damage his psychological health.
Furthermore
,
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children
children's
childrens
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children
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deserve to just have fun and be
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children
childrens
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children
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.
Nevertheless
, I am persuaded that it is possible to find
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a balance
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between these two options.
For example
, educating
kids
with
game
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games
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or sing that probably would be more interesting for him. In conclusion, It is good for
children
who start
education
earlier than others because his mind can receive
abd
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and
remember a lot of information and skills that appeared
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this
age often become great, but taking
his
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time
and making
him
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only learning may affect
his
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psyhological
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psychological
situation.
However
, I believe that we can give him
education
without disturbing and stealing his
time
for having fun.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Social interactions
  • Formative years
  • Curiosity
  • Structured environments
  • Preschool activities
  • Unstructured play
  • Developmental pace
  • Emotional and social skills
  • Undue stress and pressure
  • Natural development
  • Informal learning methods
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