Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible, while others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is
opinion
that Add an article
an opinion
the opinion
kids
have to start their learning in shools
since early Correct your spelling
schools
years
, but some people are convinced that they should start exploring after reaching 7 years
old. This
essay agreed it is worthier for children
to starting
getting Change the form of the verb
start
education
earlier. Correct article usage
an education
This
essay will discuss how children
can receive information and learn productive
and why giving them Change the adjective
productively
time
to spend their childhood might be important.
Kids
has
Change the verb form
have
opportunity
to learn and explore very well. I mean their brain is fresh and ready to investigate something new. Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
In addition
, often skills that was
improved by Change the verb form
were
person
as Add an article
a person
the person
kid
are becoming great people. Add an article
a kid
Thus
, it Correct your spelling
is
it
worthier for Correct your spelling
is
children
starting
learning and discovering the world Change the verb form
to start
since
early Change preposition
from
years
.For instance
, Amadeus Mozart who learned playing
Change the verb form
to play
piano
when he was 3 Change the article
the piano
years
old reached a lot of impressive achievements.
However
, Correct your spelling
children
childrens
should Correct your spelling
children
spent
their own Change the verb form
spend
time
as kids
. Giving him education
Add an article
an education
in
his age may damage his psychological health. Change preposition
at
Furthermore
, Correct your spelling
children
children's
childrens
deserve to just have fun and be Correct your spelling
children
Correct your spelling
children
childrens
. Correct your spelling
children
Nevertheless
, I am persuaded that it is possible to find balance
between these two options. Add an article
a balance
the balance
For example
, educating kids
with game
or sing that probably would be more interesting for him.
In conclusion, It is good for Fix the agreement mistake
games
children
who start education
earlier than others because his mind can receive abd
remember a lot of information and skills that appeared Correct your spelling
and
in
Change preposition
at
this
age often become great, but taking his
Correct pronoun usage
their
time
and making him
only learning may affect Correct pronoun usage
them
his
Correct pronoun usage
their
psyhological
situation. Correct your spelling
psychological
However
, I believe that we can give him education
without disturbing and stealing his time
for having fun.Submitted by zhadyra.serikbayeva2016 on
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