Prison is the best punishment for criminals. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#prison #punishment #criminals

In today's world evil rapidly growing all over the place. A number of

people

think that whoever committed the

crime

they have to be in lock-up. while I am completely agreed that, criminals should be in a lockup.

Firstly

, one convincing argument can be made that if some culprits are free from

prison

, they will be very harmful to the whole society.

In addition

, the offender

also

encourages other friends or their family members to commit a scandal. Let's take the Auckland University research team, as an example, they recently found that the young generation of the Moari community committed crimes because of their parents which already visited the jail and are now free from it.

Furthermore

, Sometimes

such

kinds of

crime

also

be a shortcut for getting rich and mostly youth so it is very important to make some hard

prison

rules so young

people

think twice before committing the

crime

. Having said that, it is

also

undeniable that, some prisoners learn some extra criminal activities from other prisoners in

prison

However

, those kinds of gangsters are

also

a threat and highly risky for other

people

. The best relevant instance is some American prisons. where we could find all kind of the criminal and they always make the gangs which harmful for other prisoners. Significantly, it is an important step to divided lawbreakers on basis of their

crime

Thus

,it can be concluded that, whoever committed a

crime

, they must send to

prison

. It is very essential for other

people

to keep a safe from

such

kind of

crime

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3Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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