Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many successful
sports
professionals
earn more as compared to people
working in other professions
. While many agree that comparatively
higher earning capacity of sportspersons is justifiable, others tend to differ. In Correct article usage
the comparatively
this
essay, I will share my views on both school
of Change to a plural noun
schools
thoughts
and share my opinion.
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thought
People
tend to side with the view that the salaries
of sports
players are justified because of the Correct your spelling
hard work
hard-
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hard work
work
that players put into their careers to be reach
a successful stage. A sportsperson is said to be successful after consistent victories and winning a number of recognitions in terms of medals and trophies, and to reach Change the verb form
reach
this
stage, a player puts in years of hard work
and training. Therefore
, when the hard work
finally
pays off in terms of handsome salaries
and complementary
benefits Correct your spelling
complimentary
such
as sponsorships, opportunity to become brand
ambassador of a number of consumer goods, it seems justifiable. Add an article
the brand
a brand
For example
, Mahinder Singh Dhoni, former captain of Indian
cricket team, was a middle-class railways worker who worked really hard to achieve his dream of being a successful cricketer and wealth followed after he bagged a number of victories for Add an article
the Indian
an Indian
Indian
cricket team in terms of national recognition by government and sponsorships of many multi-national companies.
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the Indian
On the other hand
, other professions
including doctors
, army, teachers, bankers etc. are the true backbone of a country’s economy. These professionals
also
work
tirelessly, including many years of education and investing a significant amount of money in their educations, in order to achieve their goal of becoming a certain professional. In addition
to this
, such
professionals
contribute directly to the economy of a country and providing their services to general
masses on a daily basis. Correct article usage
the general
For instance
, doctors
work
24×7 to treat ill
and elderly, teachers educate Correct article usage
the ill
people
who eventually contribute to the development of a country and economists make
economic policies Add the particle
to make
which
are a key to running a country smoothly. Correct pronoun usage
that
However
, the contributions of such
professionals
are not entirely complemented by their salaries
. A teacher, for instance
, earns approximately Rs.15, 000-20,000 per month on average which is way less than a successful sportsperson. Therefore
, it can be said that other professions
’ salaries
do not justify for
their efforts.
In my opinion, the Change preposition
apply
salaries
of other professionals
should be increased, if not matched to a successful sports
player, to the extent that their efforts are well compensated. This
is essential as the world can survive without successful sports
professionals
but would be a
chaos without good Correct article usage
apply
doctors
, scientists and teachers. The significance of good doctors
and scientists was recently highlighted during the COVID-19 pandemic which warrant
for Change the verb form
warrants
increase
in monetary benefits for Add an article
an increase
the increase
such
professions
as compared to sports
Correct your spelling
sportspeople
people
. In addition
to this
, I believe the government should come up with polices
to have a minimum starting fixed salary of a fresh graduate so that they can Correct your spelling
policies
fulfill
their daily needs and support their families comfortably.
In conclusion, I would say that Change the spelling
fulfil
sports
professionals
put in a great deal of effort and money to become successful, however
, other professions
contribute to the well-being,
and development of a nation on a daily basis. Remove the comma
apply
Therefore
, the salaries
of successful sports
player is
justified to some extent but other Change the verb form
are
professions
are more worthy of higher salaries
and other monetary benefits.Submitted by ieltsmaterialof on
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