School children are using computers in school more than ever. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion.

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With the advent of technology,
computers
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have become an essential part of human life including school children. It can be seen that
modren
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modern
pupils are using more
computers
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as compared to the traditional one. In
this
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essay, I will discuss both pros and cons associated with
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trend.
To begin
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with, the
first
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and important
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advantage is ample facilities provided with the help of
computers
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. It
provide
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the service of audio-visual classes which helps the
students
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to understand and learn the concepts in
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easy manner.
Moreover
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, it
also
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helps to increase the knowledge of the
students
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. There are many sites and websites available on the internet like Youtube, Videoder, E-papers which helps the
students
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to gain different intelligent skills.
Addionally
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Additionally
, in recent
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, due to
pandemic
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the pandemic
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of Covid-19, all the studies are going only through the internet with using
computers
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. So,
students
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do not need to go to schools
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helps to provide
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safe environment.
On the other hand
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,
besides
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the upsides of
this
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trajectory, the drawback cannot be undermined.
Firstly
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, constant work on
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cause
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type
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of
eyes
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problems
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such
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as irritation in
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, redness, low vision etc.
For example
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, normally a person
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15-16 times in
a minutes
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a minute
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but when we are working on
computers
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we blink
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weblink
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only 2-3 times in
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.
As a
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result
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it basis of dryness in
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eyes
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which long time
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our
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.
Secondly
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, it
also
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result
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different health issues viz back pain, neck pain,
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in bending, mental
problems
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etc.
Hence
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,
students
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should not excessive use
of
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these technologies and
also
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not totally
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depend
dependent
on
computers
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. To conclude, based on the arguments given above,
computers
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give many benefits and limitations to the school
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children
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children
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. It will harm
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the child of various physical and mental
problems
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and contrast it gives large benefits
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as increasing knowledge, save money, time and
upto
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up to
date with technology.
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