Online shopping has become increasingly popular. Why do people shop online? What are the environmental problems caused by this trend?

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These days most people around the world were lived and worked from home due to quarantine. Shopping online was the best choice during
Covid-19
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the Covid-19
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pandemic. There were many paper
boxs
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boxes
box
and plastics in the trash, which will be
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affecting
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effecting
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affecting
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climate
changes
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. Everybody should realize that problems and government have to do something about
it
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them
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. Most people argue that after covid-19 was
cure
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a cure
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, they might prefer shopping online to shopping outside. There are many reasons
about
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for
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buying
in
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on
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internet
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the internet
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. The main reason is convenient because many applications for shopping online was available all time and everywhere that connected WiFi and having
smart phones
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smartphones
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.
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, Shopee and Lazada was
interesting
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an interesting
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application in Thailand. The benefits that getting from
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application
were
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was
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its recommend shop that was the lowest price and deciding to pay via credit card or internet banking after that thing will ship at you home in the
next
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2-3 days. It was easy to use application for all gender and all ages. Another point to mention is promotions, which have every month.
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, 6.6 , 10-20
percent
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per cent
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discount, and
cash back
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cashback
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. Most people think that
price
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the price
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from
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of
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buying online was lower than buying outside.
On the other hand
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, one thing that you brought were contained in one box , which
made
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was made
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from paper or plastics. Everybody around the world
were
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was
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ordered many things
consequently
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many
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much
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waste
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wastes
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was increased rapidly. The problem
are
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is
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2 ways in production and eradication
in
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of
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papers and plastics.
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, illegal logging for production papers and gas emissions from
plastic
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the plastic
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factory
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factories
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. These were led
world
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the world
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in
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to
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climate changes
such
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as global warming.
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, Citizens could help to fix
about
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apply
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their routines about
use
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the use
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and reuse plastic. It might a few effects compared with Government, which have to control
overproduction
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the overproduction
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of using paper and plastic, laws about illegal logging and solution for waste
in accurate
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inaccurate
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ways. In conclusion, shopping online
have
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has
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many pros and cons.
Government
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The government
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have to balance buying online and environmental problems. Everyone pay attention
about
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it, which might decrease climate change.
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