Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

For few thousand ,years humans are destroying the natural balance. Air pollution, desertification is examples of people effects
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we look at the above problems and some solutions that politics and individuals can take to reduce the environmental issues. Let's start
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air pollution, tone of cars and factories increase the greenhouse gases in Earth
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atmosphere
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the government will earn some money to fix environmental issues
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setup new forests or help to species population. Regarding
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desertification, it is another big problem. It is obvious the problem addressed to farming as it required a lot of water.
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percentage of revers' water has been taken to farms and the water of rivers can not reach
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fixing our nature problems. People may use public transport
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because all species are connected with each other. In
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have to take responsibility for environmental damages and should take immediate action.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pollution: contamination, emissions, pollutants, industrial waste
  • Deforestation: habitat loss, biodiversity, urban development, logging
  • Climate Change: greenhouse gases, global warming, fossil fuels, renewable energy
  • Overfishing: unsustainable, fish stocks, marine ecosystems, conservation
  • Waste Production: non-biodegradable, plastics, recycling, waste management systems
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