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some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. do you agree or disagree?

#people #person #opportunity
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 that in 2002, the which part of outcomes of these 5 countries
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. Overall, expenditures of given countries for Food/ Drinks
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 amount of their incomes for Leisure/ education. With regard to
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 and lowest proportion of expenditure for shown consumer items, Turkey dominated
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, with 32.14% relating to Food/ Drinks
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 mentioned category consisted of relatively 28.91%, 15.77% of their national expenditure whereas, they allocated lower money for Leisure/ Education which
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 expended on average 6%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wealthy
  • financial resources
  • philanthropy
  • charitable organizations
  • donations
  • fundraising
  • support
  • initiatives
  • contribute
  • fulfillment
  • purpose
  • selfless
  • altruistic
  • prioritize
  • personal gain
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