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Some Universities in less developed countries hire professors from well-known universities to improve the quality of education. Some believe that this is not a perfect solution and there are other ways to enhance the quality of education. DO you agree or disagree?

#universities #countries #professors #quality #education #believe
The line graph compares that how much money four European countries expended
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 books over a period of 10
years
. Overall, in all of
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 countries, the
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 year. With regards to the
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 of book expenditures, Germany and France dominated
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 between 1995 and 2005. Germany started at 80
millions
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 in 1995, whereas
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 France was approximately 58
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. While in 10
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, indicators of Germany fluctuated showing upward trend during
first
 four
years
 and decreasing from 90 to 85
millions
dollars
 between 1999 and 2003. The
amount
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 of France gradually increased until 1999, but in
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 four
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 it experienced a significant rise, reaching just over 70 million
dollars
. At the end of
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, both of
these country
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 reached to their peak levels, respectively roughly 95 and 77
millions
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.
On the other hand
, in 1995, Italy and Austria have a negligible
amount
 of expenditures, relatively a little less than 50
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 and 30 million
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.
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 for Italy reached to a little less than 60 million
dollars
 fluctuating between 1997 and 2001.
However
, up to 1999 expenditure of Austria climbed up to 40
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 ,
then
 until 2001 remained stable. Over
last
 4
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, it moved upward to a little more than 70
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, its peak level, while Italy demonstrated a dramatic increase and culminated about 61
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dollars
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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