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In the recent years, there has been an increase in the number of people got killed on the road. Traffic designers blame drivers for driving too fast and drivers say the roads are bad. Who is to be blamed for the accidents deaths caused on roads?

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Nowadays, the role of technological advancements
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 been increasing in
teaching
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 and learning process. While plenty of benefits are observed, it has some drawbacks too. As far as I
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,
advantages
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 of
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technological improvements to
education
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disadvantages. On the one hand, it appears to
some
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 drawbacks.
First
 of all, some
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users
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 suffer from distracting attention especially young learners. They have a tendency of playing outside games, getting touch with their friends, talking with them.
However
, sitting back
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screen
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 for them and
this
 process
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to
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 of their
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of
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 learning and asking questions as well as curiosity about life.
Secondly
, some schoolchildren can not afford to get new technological devices. In
this
 way, they can get away from
education
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above-mentioned downsides, the upsides of using technology in
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 and teaching process are far greater. Above all, schoolboyboys and girls can get access easily to high-quality
education
 , as well as comprehensive materials.
Thus
, students can join foreign lecturers’ classes from miles away. They can utilise well-organised resources properly.
Moreover
, the applied change in
education
 allows teachers to get rid of old teaching methods and to improve new ones according to the requirements of the 21st century. In conclusion,
although
 some problems might be related to lack of attention and affordability of devices, I think that advantages of it are more than disadvantages.
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