Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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present, it can be said that

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can be a good tool to combine

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of different ages and cultures around the world together. I definitely disagree with

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situation because

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are from different places that have different ideas and with the gap of age, we will not have the same interest as well. Each country has different

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tastes. It is like different cultures have different values,

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will listen to the same song they might give different opinions.

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, My close friend named Zen; loves listening to Japanese songs a lot because it can bring calm and positive emotion to her mind, while her foreign friend did not agree because he appreciated that rock

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can make him calm and relax.

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's tastes were influenced by the environment from where they live.

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can not connect person to person if they have a different age gap. It is can be said that elder as baby boomer are loved listen to songs from three decades ago that it has a particular

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style, compare to me in GenZ, and I am more into pop songs that including fast rhythm

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as Kill

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Love from Blackpink. These are examples that explain that two different generations are hard to bone to each other by the

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. In conclusion, some individuals claim that

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can make

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connect to each other but

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in my viewpoint, I believe that different cultures can create different tastes because of the environment.

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, the problem of ages can cause different styles as well

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Topic Vocabulary:

universal language
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diverse audiences
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generational gaps
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