some people think governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and hosing problems to help people to prevent illness and disease. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently, it is general that to face misbehaving students at school. it happens for various reasons.
Nevertheless
, proper measures exist to alleviate the
problem
I consider two factors are to blame it happens. The crucial reason is attributed to
family related
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issues
such
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.
Thus
, divorce of
parents
can affect overwhelmingly
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children, it leads them to consider that their
parents
will not take care of them as before, even sometimes get depressed. To attract
parents
’ attention they commence
to behave
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in
bad
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way
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at school
such
as bullying, hurting others, being neglected to lessons. Hyperactivity disorder, emotional changes, genetics and lifestyle
also
contribute to
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problem
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problems
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. Students who are hyperactive, experience attention
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problems
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during the lessons, and generally, they have a tendency to interrupt teachers’
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or to distract other students.
Nevertheless
, there are some steps
which
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can be taken to mitigate the
problem
. The solution should start with talking
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behaved disruptively in private . Scolding children in front of
class
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rarely is helpful.It can breed resentment and
further
loathing.
However
, talking after
lesson
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can help find out the underlying reason behind the
behavior
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. Another effective measure is working
parents
and school
admistrators
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administrators
together.
Parents
should keep in touch with
child’s
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teachers and monitor his or her behaviour daily
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school’s
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support. In conclusion, the
problem
of children with bad behaviour will not be solved unless necessary measures are taken by talking
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kid
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at
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first
hand and
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of children’s
parents
and tutors.
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  • respiratory diseases
  • heart conditions
  • incidence
  • affordable housing
  • stress
  • infectious diseases
  • preventative measures
  • cost-effective
  • healthcare infrastructure
  • comprehensive approach
  • global warming
  • climate change
  • exacerbated
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