Some people choose to eat no meat of fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that some

people

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at the present became interested in not eating

meat

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or fish because they think that it is

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better for their health and

environment

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the environment

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around the world. From my point of view,

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this

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idea can offer more and more benefits to society, there can

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present some drawbacks to the world. In the following paragraph, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in the detail. On the one hand, I think that the consumption

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some

meat

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,

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as shark fin, in some countries, like China, can

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negative impacts

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the environment of the world due to it is a dramatic decrease of the shark populations in the ocean.

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, many

people

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who do not eat

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meat

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the meat

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of

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or

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fish believe that many

meats

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types of meat

slices of meat

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can create a lot of fat which are

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no

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benefits

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for them, and it can

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illness in their body,

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, the Avian Influenza

form

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the chickens. When they eat chickens which are

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influenza, they will

sick

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are dead.

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, I think that

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idea

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good for

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and

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due to

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,

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humans are designed to eat

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and vegetation to create protein and

mineral

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minerals

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which can help them to maintain their

body

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bodies

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.

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,

meat

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consumption is creating the ecological balance of the globe because the ecosystem must have predators and

pray

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prey

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which are the important components in the biological system.

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, many nutrients from real

meat

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are

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better than some vitamins that are taken to replace

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by some persons. In conclusion, I strongly believe that refusing to eat

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meat

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the meat

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of some

people

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can

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many advantages for them and the ecosystem, but there may

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some

disadvantage

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disadvantages

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for their

body

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bodies

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in the future. The malnutrition disease,

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.

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, it is recommended that if you want to reject to eat

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, you will have to carefully study its advantages and disadvantages.