Some people believe that a person's intelligence is inherited from the parents while others believe that their environment is the main factor. Discuss these views. Which factor do you think is mostly responsible for intelligence?
Certain individuals are of the opinion that someone's intellectual capacity is hereditary while others think that the environment is the sole contributor. There are valid opinions on both sides which will
be discuss
in the essay below.
On one hand, those who think that brilliance is inherited attribute it to the genetic components Change the verb form
be discussed
that
is
being transmitted while in utero. Change the verb form
are
Thus
this
unique feature would later manifest in the individual's life. In addition
, Parents that are intelligent, outstanding and successful in their respective fields are expected that their children would exude similar qualities because it runs in the family. For instance
, according to the research carried out in school
of nursing Add an article
the school
Abuja
Nigeria on reasons why people choose Change preposition
in Abuja
nursing
career, 25% Add an article
a nursing
nursing
students stated Change preposition
of nursing
that is
because their mothers are exceptional nurses both academically and in practical aspects.
On the other hand
, some persons state that environment actually has an impact on an
intellectual exuberance of certain people. Undoubtedly if a child is raised in an Correct article usage
the
academic
inclined territory, he or she is entitled to be brilliant. Change the adjective
academically
Also
, good nutrition and environmental hygiene has
a role to play. In Change the verb form
have
other
for the individual brain cells to stay active, good food in the right proportion is taken and proper hygiene ensured. Add a comma
,other
For example
, according to documentary
by Mind and Brain Society of Nigeria, certain food nutrients and multivitamins aids to develop Correct article usage
a documentary
brain
and its components Correct article usage
the brain
hence
making someone to
be intelligent.
To sum up, in my opinion, Change the verb form
apply
environment
has an influence on an individual's intellectual level Add an article
the environment
interms
of nature and nurture principles. Correct your spelling
in terms
Also
adequate diet and conducive atmosphere.Submitted by ndibeanasthesia on
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