Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
Nowadays communities have the demand to travel quickly using their own private vehicles which created both traffic jam and air pollutions problem.
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measure
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measures
this
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To begin
with, when the officials have decided to swell Linking Words
price
of gasoline, they need to calculate the rise of inflation of other basic necessities. Correct article usage
the price
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The increasing
fee
of petrol will definitely Correct article usage
the fee
raising
primary Change the verb form
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commodity
as they need to be transported from one region to another. Fix the agreement mistake
commodities
Hence
, while the haves will still Linking Words
can
afford them, the inferiors may not. Remove a modal verb
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Furthermore
, subsidized diesel fuel is likely will not Linking Words
distributed
evenly and tend to be misused by certain groups.
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On the other hand
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the government
also
providing public transportation to substitute the needs of personal cars. Linking Words
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facts
that much funding is required to invest in a better rapid transportation mode, Fix the agreement mistake
fact
such
high commitments are needed to finish the initial route. Linking Words
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but they did not Fix the agreement mistake
systems
linked
with one and another. Change the verb form
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As a result
, most of the population there still heavily depend Linking Words
with
their own private vehicles.
To conclude, even though constructing Change preposition
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transportation system is a direct measure to combat Correct article usage
a mass
this
problem, it required a lot amount of money and commitment to finish. Linking Words
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environmental
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issue
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price
provided that the government already considering the knock-on effect Fix the agreement mistake
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such
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