Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays communities have the demand to travel quickly using their own private vehicles which created both traffic jam and air pollutions problem.

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to tackle

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issue is to increase taxation

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the fuel fee. I am personally may not agree with

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To begin

with, when the officials have decided to swell

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of gasoline, they need to calculate the rise of inflation of other basic necessities.

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fee

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of petrol will definitely

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primary

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as they need to be transported from one region to another.

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afford them, the inferiors may not.

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, subsidized diesel fuel is likely will not

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evenly and tend to be misused by certain groups.

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can

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providing public transportation to substitute the needs of personal cars.

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that much funding is required to invest in a better rapid transportation mode,

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high commitments are needed to finish the initial route.

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but they did not

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with one and another.

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, most of the population there still heavily depend

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their own private vehicles. To conclude, even though constructing

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transportation system is a direct measure to combat

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problem, it required a lot amount of money and commitment to finish.

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way to solve

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is by increasing taxation towards gasoline

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provided that the government already considering the knock-on effect

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as high rates of inflation and subsidized fuel.